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Charater Design - Hoshijo Luna

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星少女
Star girls, are my set of character designs based on celestial bodies. ☆
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

The concept is really nice, and I liked how you painted it, but some anatomy study is required.
Overall it's good, but for the style the head should be a little bigger and maybe the legs thinner, her face proportions are out of perspective if you compare to the body, it's a little out of balance these proportions, and the torso is a little strange, because her boobs seems to be big but small at the same time, it seems that you drew them on a different angle.
Your knowledge on hands and arms is really good, there's some fixes neeeded but you're on the right path